1. Correct the grammar and spelling2. Change the order of some of the sentences to help it make more sense.3. Write a strong introduction and conclusion.During my long stay in Thailand, I had to solve a lot of hindrances and
obstacles myself. When I first came to Thailand, I found that my linguistic
and cultural barriers were high. During the school days, I was under a
guardian, but at school I had to do everything myself. Consequently, I was
only trying to solve difficult tasks or question myself, so I could not
complete the task or solve the questions properly. It was not easy for me to
ask for assistance or cooperate with other people.
In order to overcome these concerns, I joined the soccer team, a team sport.
I thought that I could overcome my weakness in the course of training I was
placed, with one common goal with other team members.
On a large soccer field, not much things can be accomplished with your own
ability.
Good
results
can
be
achieved
in
the
process
of
actively
communicating and cooperating.
At first, it was not easy for me. I found it difficult to ask why my members
were doing so, and to tell them what I need. However, as time went on, I
became more confident in communication and cooperation, and good
outcome would come out of them.
Then, I have applied what I have learned about the communication and
cooperation from the soccer team to my academic study. Before I used to try
solving the problem alone, but I started to talk, struggle together and share
with friends and I found myself making progress in my study. Sometimes I
went to the teacher and asked questions raised during my study. After that, I
have found myself discussing with the teacher.
This was not the only thing. I have gained tenacity during the hard training
with the team members in the soccer team, which later became the driving
force to proceed without giving up against difficulties or hardship. I used to
think that study should be done alone, but I changed my ideas in a way that
problems would be better solved together, which has increased my academic
achievement gradually.
The most significant and meaningful events that happened to me during my
school life was Residential Trip. This experience gave me opportunities to do
various activities, also to gain confidence and reward when I faced
challenges to solve difficult tasks.
It has become an important chance to
reflect who I am and to build up independence as a person. When planning
to take Residential Trip at first, I simply wanted to make an unforgettable
memory with my friends before I graduated from high school, but in the end,
I learned how to survive in the wild, how to play tents, how to read maps,
how to repair bicycles, and how to cook, etc. I learned not only such
technical things, but also how to take care for each other and get along with
harmoniously. When coming into field, I was able to learn how to act and
behave well as a leader in front of the situations of conflict and
disagreement between the team members. For two days of that trip with the
lots of twists and turns, I succeeded in the end. This was the most precious
experience of my life up to now. I felt like giving up a few times and going
back home before completing the given trip, but I reminded myself of how
much I made efforts to prepare this trip and decided to take patience as a
leader. At the end, I felt that I have grown up inside myself when this trip
was finished with good outcomes.
Thailand is a world-famous tourist destination visited by many tourists. In
particular, the city of Bangkok is gorgeous, with sky scrapers and many
outstanding department stores. But behind the gorgeous buildings, most of
the urban areas are old and worn out with many old and obsolete houses
and poor neighborhoods. Also, due to the big floods, many people have lost
their homes. Most Thai people do not live up to the splendor of the city of
Bangkok. However, people in Thailand, the country of smiles, always live
without losing their smile as they adjust themselves to the given situation.
As they always do, they conform and live to the nature and adapt
themselves to reality.
The Habitat for Humanity program is intended to build a house for homeless
people. I got involved with various funding activities and campaign and
practically participated in building house activities. This gave me awakening
a lot. I found myself how fortunate and content I am having good parents
and a good house and schools. I was raised and educated in such a good
environment without any specific difficulty. I came to appreciate with all
these, which I had been remained unrealized until that time.
Also, when I encountered the Thai people who did not lose their smile
against the difficulties and hardship, I came to look into myself who used to
be frustrated and get lazy before the obstacles. So now, I am living in
Thailand as a Korean with smile and hope of life no matter what hardship or
difficulties I might encounter.
My dream is to become an international reporter.
I dream myself as a reporter who does not simply delivering the fact, but
bridging people by heart to heart. With the advancement of the Internet and
communication technologies, the world is getting closer and people can
easily connected to the worlds news. But there are something unique what
they actually feel from the news in the writing or photos. I wish to be a
reporter who wants to convey the real feelings of them. I have a talent for
language, ability to understand people’s mind and heart and I am also
special capability to approach people. I believe that there is no way to have
communication by heart with no proper language. Since my place is
Thailand and I wish to understand the life of Thai people more, I will
continue to study new language with my linguistic talents as well as Korean,
English and Thai.
I desire to study journalism to equip myself with knowledge and aptitude
that is required for medians. I wish to commit myself to go and run
anywhere and everywhere in the world to know and understand what people
actually feel and then I want to deliver to the world. That is why I have
chosen journalism.

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